Is this story any good?

Wow. That was dramatic, wonderful, attention grabbing, poetic, and left me wanting more. But, I think this story was just for venting your more dramatic emotions. It's so dramatic, that I am scared you are going to lose that dramatica (I know that's not a word sorry) in the middle to end of your story. People will be entranced by that wonder, and then possibly drop the book when it becomes less dramatic. You should tone down the dramaticaa bit in the beginning, and then build up to the best scenes afterwards.